Edit prepositional phrases: use possessives or adjectives

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the disclosure made by the other partythe other party’s disclosure
a statement . . . previously made by that personthe person’s own previous statement
by order of the courtby court order
a judgment for the payment of moneya money judgment
judgment by defaultdefault judgment
the jurisdiction of the court over the person of the defendantpersonal jurisdiction

Read the notes on the Plain Language revisions to the US Federal Rules of Court:

Michigan Bar Journal articles by Prof. Joseph Kimble:


A Drafting Example from the Proposed New Federal Rules of Evidence (August 2009)
Another Example from the Proposed New Federal Rules of Evidence (September 2009)
Still Another Example from the Proposed New Federal Rules of Evidence (October 2009)
One Last Example from the Proposed New Federal Rules of Evidence (November 2009)
Guiding Principles for Restyling the Federal Rules of Civil Procedure (Part 1) September 2005
Guiding Principles for Restyling the Federal Rules of Civil Procedure (Part 2) October 2005

Guidelines for Drafting and Editing Court Rules by Bryan A. Garner


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